For the sake of preserving the artistic integrity of their work, writers utilize slang, colorful mis-spellings, ebonics, profanity, cliche's and phrasing that they deem current or relevant and absolutely necessary to aid them in translating their vision to the pages of their work and into the discerning minds of their readers. Every writer works from a very specific perspective that they desperately want their readers to be able to identify with, comprehend and appreciate. And from that, a great number of writers are able to derive their own particular styles or "signatures." However, there are some fundamental rules for you to keep in mind when structuring your manuscripts. Every writer wants to establish their own unique style, but we must all still adhere to the base fundamentals of writing. Here is a helpful hint that you will hopefully find useful.
There are two primary elements to every story. The first is "THE NARRATIVE," the second is "THE DIALOGUE."
Traditionally, the narrative is the telling of the story from a 3rd party perspective. In this element there is no slang, no ebonics. The goal is the progression of the story in a clean, clear and concise manner. "The Dialogue" is where you would exercise the slang and ebonics and any other subtle (or not so subtle) nuances. And that is because the dialogue is where you are demonstrating the personality of each individual character.
Now, have there been stories written, where the slang, ebonics, or so-called "signature style" is being utilized within the body of the narrative? - Of course there are. There are authors who have mastered the art of constructing their stories in this fashion, and they are better than good at it. But if you were able to ask them, each would tell you that their secret to being so effective at this skill came about only AFTER mastering the fundamental rules first. That is the secret. If you want to be able to break the rules, you must first master them. Understand them and their purpose to a fault. Then you will possess the ability to bend them to your will.
That being said, there are still some things that simply cannot be changed. Here is a small list of just a few.
1). Capital letter at the beginning of each sentence.
2). Proper punctuation at the end of each sentence.
3). The use of quotation marks to signify dialogue.
4). The separation of the dialogue, (in quotations), from the body of the narrative.
5). 5 space indents for each new paragraph.
These examples are not meant to insult the intelligence of anyone, especially those of you who are seasoned readers or writers, but the simple truth is that there are literally "THOUSANDS" of new, young, passionate writers who are completely untrained and unprepared and have not had a formal education in their craft, but they are out here putting pen to paper every single day creating poetry, writing novels, screenplays for dramas, comedies and full fledged movies. It amazes me that in all of these groups, that are suppose to be "SUPPORTIVE," all anyone actually finds is criticism. Rarely do I see a scenario where others are going to a writer and simply trying to give them some constructive criticism or guidance. Everyone is too busy looking for an excuse to weigh in on the writers faults or shortcomings or mistakes. A person's writings, their work, is not a joke. For the most part, this is their passion. Even if they are not actually any good at what they do,...we are in a position to help them become better by sharing our own personal knowledge or expertise.
I believe that every person was given a voice for a reason. And that reason is because we all have a story to tell. And every person on this earth has a right to tell their story. Understanding that everything is not for everyone, we each have a God given right to not read it or hear it, if you so choose, but no one has the right to silence the voice of anyone.
Instinctively, my first advice to EVERYONE who is dead set on pursuing any craft is to GO BACK TO SCHOOL AND GET A FORMAL EDUCATION. Unfortunately, few adhere to that advice. But as an alternative, the internet is a wealth of free information. If you want to learn and grow and be effective in whatever your passion is, take the time to learn everything that you can about what you love. Read, write, participate in any activity that will help you broaden your horizons. And above everything else, IGNORE YOUR NAY-SAYERS. It doesn't matter if they don't get it or appreciate what you do. Someone else will. And your words, your sentiments, your experience, your vision, as you have it annotated in the pages of your work, may well be the light and salvation that leads another soul out of the darkness. Learn your craft. And continue to create with pride. - Adrian Milan